natch's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Duel 2]

hey, you've gotten a lot better

Hey buddy, this looks a lot more smooth than your first movie. Listen, you've got to learn that the smoothest animation will come when you break your character apart into pieces and tween each body part individually. Your frame by frame work is a lot smoother but if you use motion tweens, flash will make it seemless. Its as simple as drawing you character piece by piece and making sure to edit center of rotation on your pieces. If you still want to stick frame by frame then i'd suggest increasing your frames per second. Lol, i like the rurouni kenshin influence as well as the dbz. You managed to mix the 2 and that makes you a 5 in my book. Can't wait for part III.

[The Blind Samurai]

not bad

Hey, I dunno about the last review but this was original. You're new at flash and i have to give you props for a good first effort. Clean up your drawings a bit more. I like your style though. Simple elements like the all black screen and all you see is slashes.

[Immortal Warrior]

wow....

this looks painstakingly crafted but its quality shows. Though looking at your other submissions box, you have some puking and sticl fights movies on here. Good nevertheless, and 5 it is!

[The Stick -- Part 1]

wow

I have not seen stick this good since xiao xiao! Everyone, definitely vote this flick up! You really must of spent a lot of time on this. I especially love the wide screen viewing!

[Not my Day (EP:1)]

heh

This is pretty funny. A lil short but its pretty ill. Nevertheless I enjoyed it thoroughly. Next The bunny and baby were both drawn pretty well.

[Faces of Evil]

heh cool

Hey not bad, I actualy liked this a lot. If you're using DDR music, I'd suggest tweening some abstract boxes and circles in the background. I like what you did with the morning and pac man. Keep it up!

[Operation: Chop Stick 2]

dude!

I'm seriously a huge fan of your stick animations. You're about the only guy out there still churning out some real hi quality stick movies. keep it up! you're almost up there with xiao xiao... even though the bastard never finished the mutilator... You got my 5

[Deliverance Movie]

this make me chuckle

but only b.c i loved that movie. I don't think any of those images were your own. Just a bunch of imported animated gifs. Never the less though it was funny. Try cropping your photos a bit. Good voice acting though.

[Stick Trouble 1]

needs work

you got the right idea though. I liked how you changed camera angles. You got talent in there, just put some more work into your movies and you score will reflect it. Hey it could be worse, a lot of ppl on NG can't animate at all, you at least got soemthing to work with. Keep it up!

[Duel 1]

good start

Hey man, good effort on your first movie. You need to decide whether your sticks are goign to be frame by frame or you could try tweening your sticks. Anything to make your animation a bit smoother. I like your attacks, very dbz-ish (big dbz fan), and you have some creative twists in the mix, most noticeable the psuedo end. Good music too. Keep practicing and don't let any stick hater stop you from animating. take care and good luck! I'll hit you with a 5 b/c your score shouldn't be that low.

ZionOfChaos responds:

Thanks... i agree... it is quite a bit choppy at the begining and the ending... Mostly because: the begining, i was learning flash. The end, i got eager to finish. I'll try to be more careful next time